Tuesday, 2 December 2014

Feedback From An External Source-Ben Young of Teesside University

During our lesson on the 1st December, we had Ben Young from Teesside University. Each member of the class explained their respective ideas and we all received feedback and his thoughts on each idea.

His response to my idea and concept was positive, and he liked the reference to Gillian Wearing's art within my video, which is the concept of wearing lies.

However, one criticism he had was that my video lacked the effect of causality, in the sense of that there is no direct or implied cause for the characters to remove the white shirts. Which I have decided to act upon and make the necessary tweaks in order to make my video appear more fluid.

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